Nathan James Norman March 9th 2012, 4:07 pm
Honestly? I don't know what characters you intend to use in your universe, so this suggestion may throw your plans way off base:
I would drop the "War of Religion" background, and ease the anti-religion of the universe. Historically persecution has strengthened Christianity . . . so a war against it that has essentially wiped it out doesn't personally ring true for me. I would have the religions of the world lose most of their influence, followers and meaning. They're not dead, but they've become complacent, and almost forgotten by the masses.
But then I would pick up in the hydroponics gardens where a Christian/monastic movement is happening (although very slowly). This concept is absolutely fantastic.
Again, without knowing what sort of characters/settings you have in your universe, I think your story would work very well with one of these gardeners (even if he/she isn't the main characters).
Anyhow . . . just my thoughts. Take 'em or leave 'em.
Thanks for sharing!
Happy Writing!